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Post by Chris Williams on Jun 29, 2014 19:25:43 GMT -6
Alrighty, let me know what you think of any work that I put up  Any and all feedback is appreciated and encouraged! |
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Post by Chris Williams on Jun 29, 2014 19:27:14 GMT -6
Alright, my first RP for US10 is here: msw.freeforums.net/thread/755/change-illusionVery heavy on character development. I'm assuming Magician won't show, so I really just wanted to tell you a story... Let me know what you think! |
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Post by Chris Williams on Jul 4, 2014 15:22:11 GMT -6
One of my first ever promos as Chris Williams, from 6-7 years ago. I use it in every fed at the very beginning to simply show more backstory to Williams, not for competitive purposes. Hope you enjoy the story! msw.freeforums.net/thread/798/most-important-promise |
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Badgerman
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Post by Badgerman on Jul 4, 2014 17:08:03 GMT -6
I've already told you what I thought about your current stuff over Skype, but I'll comment on that classic you just posted.
My heart.
You're making me think I should go back and get some old material on here as well, but old Garland is nothing like current Garland is. I mean, they're both nuts... But old Garland probably wouldn't dress in a judge's outfit before heading out to the arena. Keep on truckin' Chris. And hey, everyone else come give this man some feedback!
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Post by Salman Van Dam on Jul 4, 2014 19:21:59 GMT -6
Pretty good so far. I am enjoying the character quite much.
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Post by Frank Washington on Jul 4, 2014 19:35:58 GMT -6
The feels man. I've always been a fan of your work and if you're rusty you're not really showing it. Looking forward to see how you progress here in MSW. I also enjoyed the flashback as it was a trip down memory lane, wouldnt mind seeing more of those to see the contract between your work back then and today.
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Post by Das Admin on Jul 5, 2014 16:01:55 GMT -6
the judge garland segment you wrote was golden. Hopefully ya stick around actively once this angle with ol' Frank is done |
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Post by Chris Williams on Jul 5, 2014 17:24:28 GMT -6
Lmao, didn't know I wrote the Judge Garland segment... Badger's topic is THAT WAY.  |
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Post by Das Admin on Jul 5, 2014 17:54:20 GMT -6
YES YOU DID DON'T LIE! IT'S A CONSPIRACY! But nah I had multiple windows open I blame Keith. |
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Michael Smart
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Post by Michael Smart on Jul 8, 2014 13:39:03 GMT -6
Resorting to recycling your old material already? Tsk tsk. You don't seem to be having much rust on you, you're off to a good start. You've established your reason for being in MSW (me  ) quite well. You being obsessed with Smart is a great reversal from our feud in IPW where Smart was obsessed with you, I look forward to our inevitable clash. |
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Post by devilssaint on Jul 8, 2014 23:24:17 GMT -6
I've been refusing to reply to this because there is nothing I can pick out of it. The only thing I can say is that it needs a "Dem Feels" warning at the beginning of it. That's all I got. That was three Frank Washington's out of a Scotty Addams on the rp scale of greatness. Fantastic job, and keep it up.
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Post by Chris Williams on Jul 20, 2014 21:06:45 GMT -6
Would really love to hear your guys' thoughts on my latest promo for B2B, it was the first mostly match-focused piece I've written in a long ass time. msw.freeforums.net/thread/886/hangover-hypeAny and all feedback is welcomed!!! |
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Lebroc Harris
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Post by Lebroc Harris on Jul 20, 2014 21:51:58 GMT -6
Love how Chris William cut the promo. If it is okay for me to call your piece a 'promo ', if not sue me than. Anyway I love the way he talked about not backing down in the end. There was intriguing comments he made before he said "Because I refuse to be outhustled.
I refuse to be over-matched or underprepared. " , those comments really caught my attention, not only because I never read them, but the way it was written down and presented was really unique. I can't wait how Matt, Ian and Saint would respond. This fatal Four Way match for The Pure 15 Championship is going to be epicly pure. Have fun mate and good luck.
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Post by Chris Williams on Jul 25, 2014 0:22:37 GMT -6
Piece #2 for B2B is up. I don't feel as satisfied with this one, but it's partly because it's fucking 230am and I give up on catching Matt's 18 fucking promos, haha.... msw.freeforums.net/threads/recent/909Let me know what you think! |
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Post by Lebroc Harris on Jul 25, 2014 9:23:00 GMT -6
One thing I want to say after reading all those mega four talented people roleplaying for this pure 15 championship. Why are you making it hard for me to predict a winner ? LOL....
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Any and all feedback is appreciated and encouraged!
) quite well. You being obsessed with Smart is a great reversal from our feud in IPW where Smart was obsessed with you, I look forward to our inevitable clash.
