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Post by Deleted on Jun 30, 2014 10:43:19 GMT -6
Never really cared for "feedback;" but since this is literally the first role-play I've EVER typed with this character - sock it to me.x | Introduction to Sainthood.
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Post by Deleted on Jun 30, 2014 13:26:22 GMT -6
Interesting read. The character's definitely an unorthodox Heel. This should be quite the interesting matchup mainly because it'll give Peyton pause, I feel.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 13, 2014 8:12:15 GMT -6
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Post by Deleted on Jul 13, 2014 8:47:13 GMT -6
I thought that it was pretty good to be honest. You tore Ian down without tearing him down which is something hard to do but you did it very well. I like the High Society stuff that was pretty good. You do a good job on the scene setting which is something I really struggle with myself. A good promo and if I didn't know better it would seem that you'd written more then 2 promos with him.
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