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Post by Anne "Flying" Grayson on May 14, 2016 23:27:44 GMT -6
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Post by Anne "Flying" Grayson on May 17, 2016 0:18:54 GMT -6
Got 1 show RP out, 1 Dev piece, gonna get another show RP out tomorrow. But first chance at really working on this character in a long time so I'd like to know what y'all just kinda think of the character.
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Post by |Pure Greatness| on May 18, 2016 13:11:44 GMT -6
Hey, I read your developmental and show pieces, and I can say that in this day and age some might take it as an insult but your character in her quest to prove herself in her own right as a performer has a "white meat babyface" feel to her. Not neccesarily bland or generic, kissing babies, and helping old ladies across the street do-gooder but she has a very real underdog feel to the character. In essence Anne will always be fighting from underneath and having to overcome the odds, prove herself, and that she can hang on her own merits. Many might underestimate her. I just get that feel from your roleplays and match interactions. My feedback to you is to use that as fuel for your character, peel back the layers of the onion. I loved the personal touch of why she became a wrestler in your developmental piece and the progression from then to now. I like that you restated your intent to prove yourself as in your show rp now going forward get into the nuts and bolts of it all. The reason why this is your chosen profession. Why we should pull for Anne? Why Anne is not to be taken lightly.
Keep up the good work! I look forward to seeing more of your work!
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