Lexi Pryce..

Eeeesh, I don't have much to give you that would HELP your promo, it was damn great. Reading through it, you truly get the sense of Lexi as a person. Putting the anger about her leg aside, she is explosive. Her dialogue and movements come off as so sudden, like a cork popping off. Not a graceful fluidity, but a calculated kind of aggression that moves and reacts in quick bursts, and that's awfully damn hard to convey in writing. You did a wonderful job, and I'm very interested to see more!