Michael Smart
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It's not just an adjective...
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Post by Michael Smart on Jun 26, 2016 13:55:59 GMT -6
I already have an old feedback topic here, but since I'm showing up with a different character, I figured I'd start a new thread. Michael Smart is significantly different from what I used to write here as Daniel. Michael is my first e-fed character, and while Daniel has always been easier to write for, I think Michael is the more interesting character. I wrote a dev promo, which I'd hoped to get up way earlier, to give a sneak peek into his current motivations and mental state. It's based on the segment from Unstoppable 24, but from Michael's viewpoint. Let me know what you think. The Ninth Step
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Lebroc Harris
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Post by Lebroc Harris on Jun 28, 2016 21:22:58 GMT -6
Pretty good. You shown how intense the bond between all three of them is going to be. Especially given the past history between Williams and Smart. So, I said your post worked out perfectly for Michael. Anytime we would see the painted face cousin of his any time soon. I would love to get another crack at him.
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Michael Smart
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It's not just an adjective...
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Post by Michael Smart on Jun 29, 2016 8:16:10 GMT -6
Daniel definitely isn't gone for good. I don't want to bring him back right away, as I want to take Michael as far as I can on his own, but we'll definitely see Daniel return one day.
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Badgerman
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Post by Badgerman on Jun 29, 2016 16:24:43 GMT -6
All I really want to say is that you're still top quality and I'm happy to be working with you again.
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