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Post by Deleted on Mar 11, 2014 20:40:36 GMT -6
Alright, with my recent RP making it just before deadline with absolutely no intention to sandbag my opponent(sorry RJ), I figured I would go ahead and ask for some feedback. I felt it was better than my first MSW RP, but by far not my best all together. If you want, please leave some feedback and let me know where I can improve. Click here |
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Post by Deleted on Mar 13, 2014 17:17:42 GMT -6
I thought it was good. It was like you said better than your first one which is good improvement always helps. I don't think you needed to have a Q&A type feel int he promo to be honest. If you are going to do one of those have more questions just having a couple doesn't work at least in my eyes. Also maybe add some more spacing meaning when you do an action once and awhile put it on another line, not with the speaking part because sometimes it seems to jumbled. But still good work man.
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