Can I get some feedback?

Clashaboration is a good way to put it, I believe.

I'm reading through your last four now and am planning on giving each my own bits of feedback. Please wait as I add in my thoughts through edits. 

#1 - Define: Abomination | [Unstoppable #6 RP 1]

First off, I'd like to state that I'm really liking your gimmick and the character. I think you play the hero well and I appreciated the Pulp Fiction reference. I'd like to comment on this one that you did a great job handling the large number of character and fellow wrestlers that you were targeting. The direction was good and the idea was good. You also ended this one on a very strong note and tied it back to your gimmick. Really good work on this one.

There wasn't anything I didn't like about this one.

#2 - A boy and his prophecy | [Semi-Finals RP #1]

“I am going to waste my time here, talking about how menacing Neforian is." I think you meant to add a 'not' in there? Just an example of some of the bits that seemed off about this one, another being: “I know that you and all the others who have stood against me and failed have the dreams and aspirations to become MSW Champion, but I cannot allow this." That particular sentence just stood out. Maybe you could have written that as: “I know that you and all the others who have stood against me and failed have the dreams and aspirations to become MSW Champion... But I cannot allow this!" It's been a while since I took English classes, but I felt thrown off on that sentence after the comma. So, a few run-on sentences here, but another great execution.

Still digging the gimmick and about to walk into the next one.

#3 - Every hero has a secret | [Semi-Finals RP #2]

The slight changes in visual style are really good in this one. You use imagery well in this promo and place them very cleanly. The switch back to your previous writing style was good, but I really want to see more character interaction like you hinted at in the opening of this one. For the last 3 promos, what you've been saying is fine and the gimmick is working out and played very well, but all three sort of blend together so far. They all are very similar and I'm looking forward to a one-off scene change in the future, or just more characters being written in for you to interact with every now and then. Don't get me wrong, I like what you're doing and you hype your matches up very well. I just want to see how you play the character outside of your "designated area." 

Well written again an an interesting opening this time. I would love to read more about that past you hinted at. Another really solid piece.

#4 - EVIL EMPRESS OF YOUR FILTHY WORLD | Artemis | Debut Promo

This one confirmed my feeling that all of the previous pieces belonged together. The only thing I'll say here is I thought the Peyton character was acting a little off after reading the previous promos back to back. I was just expecting at least one comment about being a hero while maybe your sister cuts you off. However, you did put him in a new setting and now have someone to play off of, which is what I just said I would like to see, haha. That being said, this particular piece was more about this new character of yours, which I'm interested to see more of.

Cool dynamic of having her claim to be a villain while her brother is the hero of MSW. This could make for some fun and exaggerated dialogue between the two that will be great fun to read. I'm confident that you know what you're doing after reading all of these and I'm looking forward to more. The only worry I have is that you'll burn yourself out from positing so many promos so quickly. Don't be afraid to take it slower in the future as you might come across some pretty gold ideas if you sit on them a bit more. Sorry if parts of this came out as rambling, I haven't had my coffee yet. 

FINAL THOUGHTS: Keep up the heroics!

Good stuff as always, mang. Just don't join the tag-team division and try to take those titles too!!!