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Post by Deleted on Apr 29, 2014 14:20:04 GMT -6
Can I get feedback on my rp please? It has been a long while since I last rp'd.
Thanks.
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Post by Deleted on Apr 29, 2014 15:15:27 GMT -6
I thought that it was fairly good. You got to see the idea of Cash which is good and you kind of got into why he wants to do this. Getting the blessings from the former boss was meh to me. I don't think that it needed to be added but I guess that is nit-picking. One thing that I like is the southern drawl you have it seemed very authentic to me at least.
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Post by HEEL on Apr 29, 2014 18:30:12 GMT -6
I thought that it was fairly good. You got to see the idea of Cash which is good and you kind of got into why he wants to do this. Getting the blessings from the former boss was meh to me. I don't think that it needed to be added but I guess that is nit-picking. One thing that I like is the southern drawl you have it seemed very authentic to me at least. I controlled the character that Deacon used in his RP; Stanley Biehn. He's a (Jim Cornette faced) promoter in the South [Ring of Rebels and more recently, Southern Pro Wrestling] and the relationship crafted was that Deacon was a bright up and comer that got sidelined from serious injury. Biehn is pretty much his father figure and Deacon made the commitment to not work ANY promotion without Biehn's blessings- because Deacon is a man of strong principle and also because Biehn continued to pay Deacon despite being injured and kept a roof above his head and food on his table. Nonetheless, great to see him back as I've always been a fan of Deacon Cash. The Bryce/Deacon feud never had a fitting end as things went South but I know that there's a lot he can offer the fed. I'm extremely happy to see him here and keep up the good work, brother! |
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Post by Deleted on Apr 29, 2014 18:34:05 GMT -6
Thanks guys! Jus, brother, it's great to see you here in MSW. I heard you was here and had to join once I heard that. Thanks for allowing me to use Stanley in my rp.  |
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Post by Deleted on Apr 29, 2014 18:47:40 GMT -6
So far so good, though my only (slight) issue would be the size of the font. Maybe make it a bit bigger?
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Post by Deleted on Apr 29, 2014 18:57:44 GMT -6
Now that I have more of a backstory with the man he was talking to it does work a little bit more. It was good work just when you are coming to a new place it is hard to get into the past of what your wrestler did. But when it gets fleshed out more it works.
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