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Post by Deleted on May 24, 2014 1:18:25 GMT -6
C WUT I DID THAR? Anyway, this is the topic where you can leave all your magical feedback regarding my promos. I'll lap it up like a happy little puppy dog and run around for a few days with my chest all puffed up because my ego has increased ten-fold. Or not. On a serious note, this is a new character and I'm still kind of undecided on how I would like this character to play out. I've got a few pieces in the works, so feel free to leave any feedback (good, bad or indifferent) so that I can continue to work on, and hopefully improve my character any my writing so that you can all have another awesome MSW writer to read. First Intro / Dev RP (An Introduction): msw.freeforums.net/thread/552/introduction?page=1&scrollTo=1760It's kind of short, but I really like it. It's sort of the product of my own brainstorming and idea production when I was developing my character. I just started imagining him going off in to a little monologue and....blam, this piece was born. Let me know what ya think.
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Post by Badgerman on May 24, 2014 10:53:53 GMT -6
I'm glad to see you back around and this was pretty great. I'm already a big fan of the character's attitude and I can't wait to see how he's written in the ring. He'll steal not only watches... But the whole show... I can be lame too. Great work man!
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Post by Das Admin on May 24, 2014 12:16:21 GMT -6
Definitely an interested piece man. I can't say I've seen a character like it before so I'm curious to see where you take this.
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Post by Deleted on May 28, 2014 8:59:30 GMT -6
First TV RP/Char Dev (Opportunity Knocks): msw.freeforums.net/thread/578/opportunity-knocksThis is the first part of my story for this week. I'm not booked in any active feud (haven't been around long enough!) and I don't imagine for one second that a newbie can debut and win a number one contender's match, so I've decided to just use this as a Char Dev week. This is a little scenario that will (hopefully) give a little insight to the character and has been set up in such a way to allow me an opportunity to give some sort of interview as well. Let me know whatcha thinks!
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Post by Badgerman on May 28, 2014 11:48:29 GMT -6
Just read your last one and I'm already hoping that this thing you need Fields to help you out with involves a car chase and gun fight. However, I have no idea where you will take it. For all I know you might just want him to come with you to get your dry cleaning... However I'm hoping for the crazy Grand Theft Auto like spin.
As for the writing, it's quality as always man. You should really try to win, I think you're a good as ever. Also that formatting on your Part 1 was pretty nice looking. Rooting for you and I'm excited for the next part. I'm liking the character a lot and I see a lot of potential.
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Post by Deleted on May 28, 2014 14:54:13 GMT -6
TV RP #2/Char Dev (Opportunity Knocks): msw.freeforums.net/thread/578/opportunity-knocks?page=1&scrollTo=1842The second and last part of the Char Dev scenario, which will lead nicely in to an interview promo to top off my contributions for this week. I wanted to do something a little bit different to the usual "OH HEY NEW GUY, GIMME INTERVIEW" promo, but at the same time, wanted to be able to do one of those typical interview promos. This gives me the best of both worlds I think!
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