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Post by Deleted on Jul 9, 2014 15:13:46 GMT -6
I thought I would ask for feedback. Please let me know. Dee Are you Ready!
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Post by Deleted on Jul 9, 2014 16:04:17 GMT -6
I think that it was good.
I don't think you needed the training part to be honest. You could have taken that out and it would have been better where you just went in and talked about the match. You did a good job on the opponents but I think that you need to expand on that in the second promo. Also maybe put the description parts into italics it will make it read easier.
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