Unstoppable #1 Feedback

I loved it. Well written, I loved the action. I can't wait till the next card. This only makes me even more pumped to be here. I felt like I was watching MSW, Like it was really on TV, it's a lot better then that crap TNA and WWE are putting out today. ten out of fucking ten. Great job.

I seriously don't care about grammar or what not.. we all got them in our rp's every now and then so just read over it.. this is the kind of results I love.. it was a full action packed and story filled show awesome as usual babes!

Anybody who knows me will know its true when I say that I'm no grammar nazi. More time than not proper speach loses out in my posts to my southern speak. However, that being said, there's nothing wrong with what Von stated in his review of the show either. Justin asked for feedback about what people liked, didn't like,everything like that, and the typical "hoo-hah". His feedback request was not just for showering praise on management.

So yeah its true for most of us that proper grammar isn't always a big thing. But it doesn't deminish anyone's opinion if it is. And its not even like it was said the show was unreadable because of any grammar mistakes.

My main point here is that when management asks for all types of feedback, we shouldn't respond to someone else's feedback in a way that can be taken as attacking or mocking. And if you think what ya said can't be? I felt compelled to make this post about it. Soooo....

Like Shells said it was not said to be meant coming of wrong John you know me better then that. I just stated that for me the opposite of Von's opinion is the case, as in I don't care about grammar one way or another as it is an international group of roleplayers many of them not having English as their first language and I just tend to read over any mistakes. What I posted was just my opinion just as was asked for.. Von has his opinion which is fine to.. I never stated otherwise.. Besides all of you should know me well enough that if I truly disagree with anything you will know it..

I thought it was pretty damn good. The matches were well written and I was on the edge of my seat on some of them. Also the seggys were good as well. All and all it was a great debut show. Keep it up.

I'd have to agree on something that was previously said already. I am a really big fan of the use of images in shows to help put the reader into the action. I think that's one of my favorite things in e-fedding and I have to respect the fed heads for giving us that little bit extra.

I was a fan of the opening segment and the push that this fed is giving the women's division. I have yet to be in a fed that put so much backing on that section of the card, so it's a nice breath of fresh air and makes me excited to see more action out of female characters and less focus on all female characters being girlfriends/valets. The main event was well put together and felt like a great send off to the first show and the segments worked well to plug the future shows. Maybe there were some grammar issues here or there, but I'm willing to forgive a great deal for a first showing and I wasn't deterred at all by small imperfections. I'm excited about the future and I wonder what will happen between Frank and Garland next show.  

EDIT: I'd also like to suggest you guys put up a sub-board for feedback on shows and potentially allowing people to post topics asking for feedback on their promos. Only growth can come from positive and negative feedback and I feel like a great deal of people can benefit from criticism and congratulations on their work.

It was a good show. I do understand how errors can stop the reader, but I didn't see any that made me stop to think what the writers were trying to say. The errors were really basic and I can overlook them because it didn't ruin my flow.

I do think it included a well-balance of segments and length to matches. The one thing I have seen in other feds were longer segments than matches, which I would prefer it to be the other way around because it then turns too much into a soap opera. I do want to commend all writers and contributors to a spectacular show.

I loved the scene with all the ladies of MSW. It helped start the division.