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Post by devilssaint on Jun 8, 2016 21:13:31 GMT -6
Duality.I was going to put up an rp for my match against Duke Andrews, but as I started writing it became more and more clear that it had nothing to do with Duke Andrews. So instead I brought it over to the Development Board. The formatting is a bit weird, but there is good reason for that. The darker grey and blue combination for the "translucent" or rational Nikki was the original formatting combination I used when I first started rping back in '08. So when I included Nikki's rational side, the one that realizes that all of this playing pretend to run from his problems has gone to far, I used the formatting that represented that old side of him. The memory scene that I have in there is a near direct quote from a development rp I did back in 2013 for Nikki. I only cleaned up the description so that it made sense in the context of the rp. It was neat being able to go back and include some of that stuff. So tear this apart. Let me know what you think of it and the rp. I really wanted to do this mainly to show the evolution of the character. Making sure that there is a clear defined line between the character that started the season and the character going forward. Also, giving some explanation to the face change without a tongue-in-cheek "Drew Stevenson's plastic surgeon" joke. It was tempting though.
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Post by Sister Catherine on Jun 8, 2016 22:00:04 GMT -6
I thought it was a very good read, and very interesting to see Nikki literally battling his inner demons and that one of them was the hardest demon of all and that's himself. I'm wondering about Eva. I like how he groomed himself to eventually become the new face, that was a nice touch. And I love the nod to the scene from the last US with the Testament of Longinus and the Holy Bible. <3
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Post by Dante Claude Carlington on Jun 9, 2016 0:21:58 GMT -6
My only complain is the DAMN FACE CHANGED :@ Why the change ? Why Why Whhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy ?
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Post by Diamond on Jun 17, 2016 21:22:22 GMT -6
Hey - really like how you handled Nikki's face change - kudos to you ... *thumbs up*... Oz
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