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Post by Chris Williams on Jul 8, 2014 20:48:36 GMT -6
Just read Garlic-Land, so here's my feedback!
Excellent rebuttal to SVD. You touched on most major points, and really emphasized the "hardcore" aspect of each character really well. My favorite piece was the reveal of the scars after describing some of your history. You've also left it open for SVD to continue and keep a really back and forth battle going between the two. This is definitely continuing your streak of great work that I last saw. Keep it up man
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Post by Badgerman on Jul 22, 2014 9:04:16 GMT -6
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Post by Lebroc Harris on Jul 22, 2014 9:50:45 GMT -6
Badger from now on I am going to call you Mister Brutality. Why ? Well coz your Roleplay Brutalized your opponents but then again I am waiting for a rebuttal from Yugio and JBC.. Anyway it was a nice read brother, and you introduce Frank Washington in that roleplay, quite nice and neat way  Keep it Up Go Badger Brutalized those who intent to wrong you ? |
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Post by Chris Williams on Jul 25, 2014 21:14:56 GMT -6
Just finished reading your last piece. Fuck, that was long! Could have definitely been two separate pieces if I actually felt it drag along anywhere, but there was always something that kept me moving right into the next paragraph. Favorite piece was Frank drilling into badger that HE has become everything he's trying to expose Frank as. Reminds me of that batman quote.
Two thumbs up, a great read
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Post by Lebroc Harris on Jul 27, 2014 12:00:37 GMT -6
That's fuckin insanity badger and that banter with Daniel Smart was hilarious brah. But it ended up in a more comical way when Tyler revealed he was playing Candy Crush the whole time you guys were arguing & Daniel Smart, you bet your keyboard that I am now going to get another roleplay up .. Nice work guys Go Mister Brutalize Badger. |
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Post by Badgerman on Aug 22, 2014 9:26:00 GMT -6
Just posted and cleaned up my latest promo and I was wondering what you all thought about it. I'll admit, I took a weird angle with this one, but I really enjoyed writing it. I am The Night - msw.freeforums.net/thread/1042/night |
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Post by Michael Smart on Aug 22, 2014 9:39:58 GMT -6
Hilarious, I loved it. The only problem was Chris flaking out on his duties as Robin. I guess you could say he... BACKED DOWN!
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Post by Badgerman on May 12, 2016 9:17:53 GMT -6
I just put together by first promo in a good long while. I kept it short in order to give an easy read and to help get myself back in the game. That being said, I'm curious what you guys think. I'll leave a link below. Thanks as always, and I'll do my best to return feedback when I get some more free time. I Was Right All Along! You All Saw It! |
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Post by Sister Catherine on May 12, 2016 9:56:47 GMT -6
It was indeed an easy read, and an enjoyable one. I like how you quoted the text instead of just describing that the loop played when it played. I could see it all in my head; Badger in that dirty ol' abandoned gym watching an old TV with a remote in his hand, looping Washington's betrayal and the tracking on the VCR blurring as he rewinds. I like that it wasn't just a promo cutting down his opponents but selling the overall angle of the Garland/Washington blood feud.
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Post by Chris Williams on May 12, 2016 22:52:44 GMT -6
Good read, thumbs up.
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For your first promo start-to-finish in quite some time, I think this was a fantastic way to get back into it. You went into the piece with a very clear point to make, and kept a tight focus throughout. You allowed yourself to touch on other topics to ensure they were covered, but were able to loop back to the original point of the RP each time. This way, you haven't watered down the entire promo by trying to tackle 6-7 different ideas at once. You can do a deeper dive into any of the other things like Badger/Williams teaming up, the match with the Alley Cats, etc. You definitely didn't show any "ring rust", good to see you haven't lost a step.
Welcome back, friend!
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Post by Badgerman on May 24, 2016 14:30:50 GMT -6
Posted a dev promo in the spur of the moment. Thought I'd go a bit deeper on why Garland's returned to MSW to help out Chris and what their goals are as a team. Curious what you guys think. Thanks. Repaying A Debt - msw.freeforums.net/thread/1691/repaying-debt |
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Post by Kaiser on May 25, 2016 21:18:34 GMT -6
The best thing about the piece was defining Robert Garland's motivations. I mean, most of us long term readers know what makes Garland wake up in the morning. It's not his daughter, btw. Now it's just the interesting part of the switch. Frank's actually the bad guy now. So~.
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Post by Badgerman on Jun 16, 2016 13:21:10 GMT -6
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Post by Lebroc Harris on Jun 23, 2016 2:31:00 GMT -6
The rabid street dogs. You use that following name for the MSW originals. Loved it bruh.
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Post by Badgerman on Jun 23, 2016 17:46:06 GMT -6
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Keep it Up Go Badger Brutalized those who intent to wrong you ?
