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Post by Chris Williams on Mar 8, 2016 9:16:58 GMT -6
Wow, 1500 words comes up quick! I love it though, forces you to really think out the arc of your story.
So, my first RP in a year and a half, "Ghosts of the Past" is up. I wanted to give a very real nod to my absence, and it became an extremely personal piece in the process. I hope you enjoy it. Please reply with any and all feedback as you read through it. I would love to hear all of your thoughts. Thank you all.
~CWilly
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Post by Mother Russia Account Now on Mar 8, 2016 9:44:55 GMT -6
I enjoyed it. Very personal, one of the best absent explanations I've seen done. Some times in plain text it's hard to convey emotion. You did a splendid job.
The only flaw? Chris Williams doesn't have a mustache.
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Post by Chris Williams on Mar 8, 2016 9:48:33 GMT -6
I enjoyed it. Very personal, one of the best absent explanations I've seen done. Some times in plain text it's hard to convey emotion. You did a splendid job. The only flaw? Chris Williams doesn't have a mustache. Haha, you never know! Awesome you caught the plain-ness of the piece tho. I normally do the color stuff, centering it, all that junk. Wanted this one to be very "just about the words", so I stuck to black and white. Thanks for reading it, and especially for the feedback! |
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Post by Badgerman on Mar 8, 2016 11:22:48 GMT -6
You did a good job writing out a bit of your backstory for the guys who never heard of you before, as well as providing a great reminder for those who were there with you the whole time. Welcome back Chris. Good to see you still breathing and putting out grade A content.
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Post by Michael Smart on Mar 10, 2016 2:36:16 GMT -6
I liked the part where you admitted that your hiatus was due to you running away from me. I didn't like the part where you didn't address the fact that you only found the courage to come back because I'm no longer around. Chris Williams will always be a coward in my eyes.
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Post by Chris Williams on Mar 21, 2016 21:47:29 GMT -6
The Monster In Us All: msw.freeforums.net/thread/1403/monster-allDefinitely tried to do something different, hope the execution was as good as the idea in my head. I'd love to know what you all thought of it, whether good/bad/otherwise! Any comments help. Thank you all, Chris
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Post by Badgerman on Mar 23, 2016 12:10:28 GMT -6
The Monster In Us All: msw.freeforums.net/thread/1403/monster-allDefinitely tried to do something different, hope the execution was as good as the idea in my head. I'd love to know what you all thought of it, whether good/bad/otherwise! Any comments help. Thank you all, Chris I like how you detail how mentally disturbed Chris has become and how he's still working on fixing himself up. Makes me think he's still not all here when it comes to making good decisions and playing to the fans he seems to care about so much. That level of violence could easily be brought back out of him, but he's trying his best to hold it back. Maybe an old friend might show back up soon to try to draw it all back out of him  |
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Post by Chris Williams on Mar 23, 2016 17:58:23 GMT -6
The Monster In Us All: msw.freeforums.net/thread/1403/monster-allDefinitely tried to do something different, hope the execution was as good as the idea in my head. I'd love to know what you all thought of it, whether good/bad/otherwise! Any comments help. Thank you all, Chris I like how you detail how mentally disturbed Chris has become and how he's still working on fixing himself up. Makes me think he's still not all here when it comes to making good decisions and playing to the fans he seems to care about so much. That level of violence could easily be brought back out of him, but he's trying his best to hold it back. Maybe an old friend might show back up soon to try to draw it all back out of him  |
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Post by Chris Williams on Apr 20, 2016 0:45:25 GMT -6
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Post by Chris Williams on Apr 20, 2016 20:48:26 GMT -6
Added the final piece of the WAR trilogy in the post above. Let me know what you think of any or all of them! Thank you
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Post by Badgerman on Apr 22, 2016 13:57:30 GMT -6
Added the final piece of the WAR trilogy in the post above. Let me know what you think of any or all of them! Thank you I think you suck! <3 Also, good luck homie. |
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Post by Chris Williams on May 15, 2016 21:57:00 GMT -6
Here is my latest piece! Continuing to try new things with the formatting, always did color in promos until this Season (which has been exclusively black/white), seeing if I want to continue it or not. Please let me know your thoughts on the role-play once you've read it! Thank you all so much for your thoughts and feedback!
Decades
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Post by Badgerman on May 15, 2016 22:12:09 GMT -6
Here is my latest piece! Continuing to try new things with the formatting, always did color in promos until this Season (which has been exclusively black/white), seeing if I want to continue it or not. Please let me know your thoughts on the role-play once you've read it! Thank you all so much for your thoughts and feedback!
Decades
Pretty damn good. Nice job summing up a bit of the history we've had and how we're working to move past this towards our common goal. You've also touched on what that goal is and what we're trying to build towards. Also, good job boosting our opponents a bit as well. The use of color worked out. One of your best yet. |
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Post by Chris Williams on May 30, 2016 8:07:59 GMT -6
Dinner With Chuck
Hope you all enjoyed it, but either way, I would love to hear some feedback! Let me know what you liked/disliked, or anything that I could improve on! Thank you all for reading!
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Post by Lebroc Harris on May 30, 2016 8:37:34 GMT -6
Dinner With Chuck
Hope you all enjoyed it, but either way, I would love to hear some feedback! Let me know what you liked/disliked, or anything that I could improve on! Thank you all for reading! When I first read the 'title name', I thought it would have some element of comedy in it. Must say, it was an awesome read, and gives a more solid vibe to the Former Vs Current Championship match. Good way to remind us all; that you were the first one to win that belt and how you feel about Capital Crew treating/carrying the belt. It was well written man. |
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